Apart from the spelling mistakes and wrong analysis (green seems to have the advantage here (12 income per turn), not yellow (basic income,5)) it's oke.
Btw, if it's a FFA red's hiding troops tactic is actually quite efficient.
I assume, from the obvious multi-accounting, the username, and the good English in the accompanying sentence, that SiG is employing a technique that the more shrewd students in this Comparative Forum Posts class might recognise as